Reviews for Favoured One
may16 chapter 5 . 6/18/2009
love this story! love the way you write, thank you!
Penname-Kitsune-chan chapter 5 . 6/17/2009
Thanks for updating!

I like how this is progressing, and how you're portraying all the characters. Also, I think the semi-interaction between Kaheem and Mahk is very realistic, and very good to read.

Well, please update soon! I would love to see what happens next!
Murakisdoll chapter 5 . 6/15/2009
aws kaheem is such a sweet soul u_u lol tho im glad that theres someone out there who can love mahnk TT its like beauty and the beast egad! lol

keep up the good work ]

-el
boofreakazoid chapter 5 . 6/15/2009
aww how cute!1
JtheChosen1 chapter 5 . 6/14/2009
O man, this is good! Keep up the awesome work!
Caisele chapter 5 . 6/14/2009
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!

There's so much...spark between them. omg. PLEASE update again soon!

PS lucky your exams are over...mine didnt even start yet D:
Penname-Kitsune-chan chapter 4 . 6/5/2009
This is looking really interesting! Please update soon!
kepteinen chapter 4 . 6/1/2009
You write so hot, I love you.
xxdarksaviorxx chapter 4 . 5/29/2009
This looks very interesting. I can't wait to read more. Please update.
Caisele chapter 4 . 5/29/2009
*drool*

this story is so hot! good job!
Murakisdoll chapter 4 . 5/29/2009
tsk tsk tsk...mahk wouldnt have to fantasize if he just asked for it nicely lol

short but great chapter none the less ]

keep up the good work

-el
Embers In My Heart chapter 3 . 5/23/2009
This is such an interesting chapter! I love the way you waited to describe why Mahknat hated his appearance. It was a nice little touch. I can't wait to read more!
BOOKFREAKAZOID chapter 3 . 5/21/2009
you better finihs this story women!

i alreay on two about a boy taking their sisters plae in a marriage one way or the other so please finish yours

the othere ones were never finsihed gr! : (
navajo chapter 3 . 5/20/2009
this is a very interesting story cant wait for more
Murakisdoll chapter 3 . 5/20/2009
aww im so glad that kaheem is so determined to win over mahk...such powerful will O.O lol yea hope that works out soon 3

keep up the good work ]

-el
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