Reviews for A Forgotten Daydream
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
'Daydream' sums up all the metaphors you've gone through in this poem, and I have to say I admire your ability to come up with so many of them, and every one of them stunning. I would have saved those ideas for separate poems XD But apparently the supply of creative ideas is not a problem for you!

The poem is beautiful too :)
headversusheart chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
"she dances with the awkward melody of two left feet."

love that.

really nice job.
Emilie DeVere chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Her sad lips of ruby have been kissed delicately by forgotten promises and" empty words" is my favourite line in this stunning poem. The imagery is quite amazing and the ending completely unexpected, yet true. There is no ugly people, you just have to look closer sometimes to find the beauty.
Amaury chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Stunning.

This is absolutely beautiful. Very simple,

but a nicely written poem.
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
This was beautifully written and absolutely breath taking. Amazing imagery used through out the poem, it has left pictures in my mind. Amazing job!

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lymli chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
the imagery is sad but it's wonderful and dark by the way.

great poem.
Isca chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
"And she is beautiful." I love this ending-this woman is beautiful no matter her looks or faults. :)
Rogue Robot chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
Wow that was wonderful!

I especially liked the lines "She dances with the awkward melody of two left feet

But with the passion of crashing waves and shooting stars"

but the whole thing was great! D