Reviews for Interior Monologue
GUEST chapter 13 . 5/8/2016
Please update this story. It is addictingly good. I'm literally starving for more..
mgaa chapter 13 . 6/2/2015
i really really like bad-ass Feather and also the child-like innocence she has...(she also kind of reminds me of Juvia from Fairy Tail...dunno why)...well...hope to read more of this...thanks for write mean action scenes... :)
Lauren Stargazer chapter 13 . 1/8/2013
Don't you dare abandon this story. I remember adding your story to my alert list a couple days after your last update and since than I've just been waiting for more. I absolutely ADORE what you've written, but it has been sooo long. So please consider updating soon. Keep up the great work.
Jynx4Ever chapter 13 . 12/13/2012
animari93 chapter 13 . 12/7/2012
You're my new favorite person!
zagato chapter 13 . 2/24/2012
Thanks for updating!
friarhmn chapter 13 . 2/22/2012
Oh yeah, Shane's definitely colder than before... But I like it :) makes things more interesting.

And oh my gosh, Feathers is so badass! Haha I loved this chapter. Who knows, maybe losing those chapters will help you make your story even better ;) can't wait for the next chap!
serahei chapter 13 . 2/22/2012
Wow, I can't believe what an ass Shane is becoming. It seems like he doesn't even care a bit about Feathers. He treat her better only to ease the guilt he is feeling. Comparing her to a dog and locking her up like a criminal. He doesn't treat her like a human.

Comparing Shane to his former self who wanted to bring back the humanity in Feathers is like looking at 2 different person.
michan27 chapter 12 . 12/31/2011
Oh, yippie!

You've changed it. I love it more!

Hohohoho. :) I cannot wait for the next chapter. I hope that you'll update soon. :)

Feather was trained to kill. YES! I looooove her character. Hmmm~

Good luck!

- mi
Alanisaur chapter 12 . 10/23/2011
This isnt the end is it? ):
ebs12 chapter 12 . 9/19/2011
I really liked this chapter but why didn't you keep in the scene where Shane's family yells at him for abandoning Feathers at the amusement park?

I'm glad you're changing the ending
xXSoundlessMusicXx chapter 12 . 9/15/2011
Oooh! Im sooooooo very much glad you decided to do this! I couldn't bear to see your previous ending to be like that... And, oh, I think it'd be awesome if you bumped it up a rating. I didn't see much mistakes... So, good luck!
MaxMcDowell chapter 12 . 9/14/2011
Well since I already did review a chapter 12 I will have to do to this way.

~Checks her e-mail and sees on update for Interior Monologue, clicks on it and sees a new chapter~...YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!~~Is jumping around doing a happy dance and baking tons of cookies and brownies for you and your muse~

Thank you for the new chapter, I've had that major writers block before(it was for an RP forum) and it drove me crazy! Then poof! The words just came to me. I can't wait to read chapter 13 and Shane's reaction.

This is one of the best plot twist that I have ever read, I’m a little envious that I don't have your talent for that .

So question time:

(1)Will Shane be as hard on here now?/Will he continue to treat her the way he has been lately?

(2)Will Shane be afraid of her now or more excepting?

(3)Is he going to tell anyone about her or keep it a secret to protect her?

(4)Is there going to be more of a romantic relationship between Feathers and Shane later on?

Define "...get some juiciness and put it as an "M". Do you mean the "juiciness" that appears in your other were wolf stories? :O

Aaaand I think that, that is all the questions I have for now so:

~Hands you 4 platers, 2 of cookies and 2 of brownies for you and your muse~ I hope these help with ALLL of you stories.

Especially The Princess and The Dragon(shamless hint/nuge there) I remeber what you said in the first chapter but Im always looking for good fantsy stories just like that one, so I look forward to the next chapter.

:) ") 3 3 3
HeartsOfDiamonds chapter 12 . 9/14/2011
Thank you. This chapter was so much better than the previous ending which was so unsatisfactory beyond words. I also like the twist at the end. Update soon?
Alanisaur chapter 16 . 6/30/2011
I was crying and this was my third time reading it. And I was dissapointed in the ending agian too. You had so many possible ways to write that ending and it wouldve made it great. How you ended it was confusing and just a a big let down. I hope you can get back to this story and rewrite the ending. Even if you think it isnt very up to parr, I think it would be more satisfying.

I think you should make her die. Even though I dont really want her too. It's just fits? Like she's dying when Shane arrives. And he tries to take her to the hospital. And she tells him how she died. Possible rape? And he's crying and freaking out. But when they finally reach the hospital she finally gives out and dies. Bullet wound, blood loss?

Then you can do an epilougue like a year later. And how Shane is so remorseful and how his outlook on life has changed. ETC.

Happy Writing.
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