|Reviews for Interior Monologue|
| jaime chapter 16 . 2/9/2011
I honestly thought that was the best ending for her. Dying isn't a good thing but it was probly the most peaceful thing for her in a world she just could not understand. Either way she would have been broken. I just wonder what will happen to shane now that she is dead and everything. But a small part of me hoped someone who wasn't shane like the doctor, could have wooed her and won he heart. Yet life doesn't always have happy endings lol
| fullybooked chapter 16 . 2/9/2011
Well,at least you now have the time for your other stories!
| Disney Is Hardcore chapter 9 . 2/8/2011
...porn stars? *sweatdrop
| MaxMcDowell chapter 16 . 2/8/2011
Well...I had a nice long message for you but some how I managed to trun the review box into an oth web page :/
And since I can't remember everything I will be brief.
I agree with whom ever told you to just leave this story.
Work on your other stories and forget about this one. The one day POOF! you'll get an idea for this one :)
Don;t worry about that people that yelled at you. Its not our story, its yours. Its your thoughts and if you muse has ran out of thoughts for this story, then it is best that you let it go. I would tell thoes readers that they should be happy you atleast tried and that you gave it the best ending that you could instead of just leaveing it hanging.
I can not wait to read new chapters from your other stories, so good luck in your writeing! :)
~Hands you 4 HUGE platers of BIG cookies. 2 for you and 2 for your muse~ I hope that these help! .
| NB-writer chapter 16 . 2/7/2011
"You should go back and continue all the other stories yo have not updated, to make up for this horrible disappointment to your fans" said your conscience.
| Garneau chapter 16 . 2/7/2011
I get what you mean about losing all drive for a story. Maybe one day it suddenly reappear.
While we are talking about stories, are you going to update Moonlight and Roses anytime soon? That would have to be my all time favourite of your stories.
Anyway I look forward to what you produce next,
| angry reader chapter 15 . 2/7/2011
i hate your story now
| Arisa chapter 16 . 2/7/2011
Okay now I'm scared your other uncompleted stories are gonna end the same way... :( Since you haven't uploaded a new chapter for them in awhile.
| fullybooked chapter 15 . 2/7/2011
HOnestly i don't really get it
| SecretAgent99 chapter 15 . 2/6/2011
I definitely wasn't expecting the story to end like this. If the poem was longer and focused more on each person a bit, I think it would be better. It's the shortness that made it odd. It's a good idea, just a little too short I think.
| Eternal Skies chapter 15 . 2/6/2011
Omg you made me so furious and angry I don't want to write a single nice thing.
First of all, the writing was awkward at times, but I over-looked it because your story had a really good concept and interesting, complex characters albeit executed poorly. I was also bothered with the rushed pace and speed by which you wrote the story. There were so many points that you could've written more about instead of just writing whatever to move on with the story.
Another thing was the ending that's not really an ending. I just feel sad for the time I spent reading this and anticipating the ending, but you didn't take the story seriously at all! I'm pissed off like hell. If you didn't find a way of ending it then don't write an ending at all, instead the major disappointment that is chapter 15.
I never lash out in my reviews. I believe in reasonable ways but I feel much better after steaming this off.
Note: you can still change the ending, y'know, even though I don't know who would bother reading something it's writer didn't put her whole heart in.
| EmptySh3ll chapter 15 . 2/5/2011
Didn't expect that. I understand that you were lost with where to go with this. Hopefully in the future, you do get inspiration to this story and maybe come back and take the plot for a nice ride. I liked the idea.
| Masquerade hide your face chapter 15 . 2/5/2011
I must admit that I am very dissapointed with this story. I thought I could've gone a lot longer with romance and lost of tragedy. But your the writer. I would say leave this story alone for a year or two come back and look at it and then most likely you will get a lot more isparation for it.
| Guest chapter 15 . 2/5/2011
i really think you should do an epilogue, it just doesn't seem complete...
| HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC chapter 15 . 2/5/2011
Oh wow. I really can't believe you ended it this way. I love your stories, you should know that by now but this is disappointing. It's all wrong Feathers doesn't talk like that and unless you'll clear it up in your epilogue or your going to do a sequel it doesn't even fit the romance genre! All I can say is your epilogue better be great.