Reviews for Rule the World: Revised Edition
BlueAki chapter 22 . 4/17/2020
Rebecca is always getting into some trouble. She seriously has the WORST luck.
BlueAki chapter 17 . 4/14/2020
Oh whoa this twist! Definitely did not see that coming.
BlueAki chapter 14 . 4/14/2020
I'm really glad to see this moment between Will and Rebecca. He was really harsh with her in the beginning so it's nice to see him being gentle with her.
BlueAki chapter 13 . 4/14/2020
Haha I'm actually shocked that James hates the sight of his own blood. Never would've thought that it bothered him.
BlueAki chapter 12 . 4/14/2020
That was so hard to read, but I'm glad that Rebecca was able to get it off her chest.
BlueAki chapter 7 . 4/14/2020
Daamn Rebecca is really stepping up!
BlueAki chapter 6 . 4/13/2020
Yes Rebecca! I'm so ready to see her kick ass.
BlueAki chapter 5 . 4/13/2020
I'm so glad James was there. I hope Rebecca will eventually start carrying a knife on her.
BlueAki chapter 2 . 4/13/2020
James is going to be so much trouble for poor Rebecca.
BlueAki chapter 1 . 4/13/2020
It's been such a long time since I read the original, so I'm excited to get to know these characters all over again.
Katie chapter 1 . 4/16/2018
OMFG. I was obsessed with the story in middle school and I just found it in the book marks on my mother's old family computer and I literally started crying, you have no idea how happy this made me.
PaintedPicture chapter 41 . 9/8/2013
Wow... I fully thought we had lost the real Rebecca for a moment. I think it would have been cool to have an alternative ending where he stayed captain of the ship and they became pirates together, it kinda annoys me that the two atlantic gods consumed and changed James just as much as Rebecca changed, they kinda prophesied something James felt he had to believe and consumed by greed thought he was entitled to it.. I also felt that the reason she was so darkened was because they didn't pursue the relationship that they were supposed to. But then. It wouldn't work would it, if they stayed on the ship? But my goodness, That was such a good and strong story. Besides the few grammatical errors and few spelling mistakes it is beautifully written. Its Capturing and not a dull moment, but most of all it flows. Nothing feels out of place. I just couldn't believe you killed the main character! I was shocked. I couldn't stop reading!
delight.full chapter 41 . 4/3/2012
I was up day and night reading this, and I am so glad that it was worth it! Slow and methodically thought out, I'm glad that you didn't make Rebecca and James' relationship quick to turn to romantic feelings. I truly thought that you were going to leave Rebecca in that darker personality version of herself, and that it was going to have to take a whole other adventure to fix her. But the way the story ended and the way in which Rebecca came back to herself was very sweet. It tied up loose ends, while fixing a major problem! Thanks for the great read!
Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 41 . 11/4/2011
I felt all warm and tingly by the end of it :D

This was a fantastic read throughout! Favouriting!
Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 28 . 10/12/2011
This story is seriously amazing! I truly hope you plan to publish!
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