Reviews for Tomorrow
name redacted chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
lol. That is cute. And kind of sad, actually. Love the rhyming and the coherant message within the poem.
pLaYFulPixI3 chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
Yup, agree totally! Live today like you're not going to have a tomorrow, only then you may live with no regrets:)
esthaelum chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
Im slightly confused as to what this poem is about, but I love the rhyming in it! It also has a nice flow and an upbeat atmosphere!
Leviticus II chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
That's interesting, and sounds well thought through, even if it might not be. :) I really like it, and as always, hope for more.
Medusa's.Protege chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
haha good if I did this when I was young I would've saved myself a lot of trouble.
vitriolicvermilion chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
Cute couplets, interesting idea. I like it.

Oh, and...AYE
Son Of Phoenix chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Beautiful poem, short sweet and yet still deep, I like it...
Myrix chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
This is like a whole story told in only a few words! It doesnt really fit humor though. It made me think, not laugh.
love fantasy chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
wow! i loved it. its a nice piece of poem u've got there..write more poems! you're grrat at it.
TreeWhisperer chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
This is really cute! Yeah, sometimes, that's what it comes down to: Do you really want to do it, when you'll have to endure the consequences tomorrow? You should write more poems! I like them :]
me. yes. me chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Aw :) Very ver cute!
writefromtheheart chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
hah! that's cute.
ecarag chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
Har dee har har. This is very cute. Yes, sometimes I'd like to take a chair, some rope, and some ductape and tie up and gag my concince.