Reviews for Tomorrow |
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name redacted chapter 1 . 4/11/2010 lol. That is cute. And kind of sad, actually. Love the rhyming and the coherant message within the poem. |
pLaYFulPixI3 chapter 1 . 4/6/2010 Yup, agree totally! Live today like you're not going to have a tomorrow, only then you may live with no regrets:) |
esthaelum chapter 1 . 3/13/2010 Im slightly confused as to what this poem is about, but I love the rhyming in it! It also has a nice flow and an upbeat atmosphere! |
Leviticus II chapter 1 . 12/30/2009 That's interesting, and sounds well thought through, even if it might not be. :) I really like it, and as always, hope for more. |
Medusa's.Protege chapter 1 . 12/27/2009 haha good if I did this when I was young I would've saved myself a lot of trouble. |
vitriolicvermilion chapter 1 . 12/6/2009 Cute couplets, interesting idea. I like it. Oh, and...AYE |
Son Of Phoenix chapter 1 . 11/20/2009 Beautiful poem, short sweet and yet still deep, I like it... |
Myrix chapter 1 . 9/3/2009 This is like a whole story told in only a few words! It doesnt really fit humor though. It made me think, not laugh. |
love fantasy chapter 1 . 9/2/2009 wow! i loved it. its a nice piece of poem u've got there..write more poems! you're grrat at it. |
TreeWhisperer chapter 1 . 8/29/2009 This is really cute! Yeah, sometimes, that's what it comes down to: Do you really want to do it, when you'll have to endure the consequences tomorrow? You should write more poems! I like them :] |
me. yes. me chapter 1 . 8/26/2009 Aw :) Very ver cute! |
writefromtheheart chapter 1 . 8/25/2009 hah! that's cute. |
ecarag chapter 1 . 8/20/2009 Har dee har har. This is very cute. Yes, sometimes I'd like to take a chair, some rope, and some ductape and tie up and gag my concince. |