Reviews for Hell Hath no fury
Miss-You-Too chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
I really like this but you made a couple mistakes. Like:

'Steriotype' is spelled stereotype.

'Strait' is spelled straight. This 'strait' actually means a canal or passage.(hahah my mind is in the gutters!)

'No since bothering the waitress' I think you ment no 'sense'?

Well that's all the mistakes i spotted. Its still well written and it had an interesting start, I'll be looking forward to the next updates!