|Reviews for Hell Hath no fury|
| Miss-You-Too chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
I really like this but you made a couple mistakes. Like:
'Steriotype' is spelled stereotype.
'Strait' is spelled straight. This 'strait' actually means a canal or passage.(hahah my mind is in the gutters!)
'No since bothering the waitress' I think you ment no 'sense'?
Well that's all the mistakes i spotted. Its still well written and it had an interesting start, I'll be looking forward to the next updates!