|Reviews for After Dinner Mints in the Fast Food Bag|
| Blueyes57 chapter 18 . 9/6/2016
amazing that the 15 yr old is wearing the same dress that nora did for the wedding lol
you must like yellow dresses or somehting
| Blueyes57 chapter 9 . 9/6/2016
if the bridesmaid dresses are yellow then why was she trying on a blue bridesmaid dress in chapter 6?
| starzenith chapter 27 . 4/18/2016
This has got to be one of the best stories I've read in a long, long time. Your writing is phenomenal.
| Du chapter 26 . 12/4/2015
I love this story, I've read it twice now. I don't really know what it is about it, just that it calls to me. I know it's 'old', but I discovered this fic barely a month ago.
I really enjoyed Nora, something in her character actually reminds me of myself. Jack was really sweet. And I think you did a superb job blending into the story all the focus on Travis (and Emily). It was wonderfully done. I'm not one to enjoy teenager stuff, but you did it right.
I wouldn't fault one single thing in this story, I truly loved it. So thank you for writing this! I hope life is treating you well, wherever you are.
| Montara chapter 26 . 9/20/2015
I loved reading your story a lot! It was very well written and the plot was great, it kept me wanting to read more. I loved the characters, too, especially Emily.
Thank you so much for sharing your story!
| MileyRowling chapter 27 . 2/19/2015
Great work! I really enjoyed this!
| It's 2018 chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
700th fav! WOO!
| hirokiri9 chapter 27 . 3/19/2014
Perfect story! Think I'm going to be addicted to your other ones' as well. :D
| secrets chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
u can't fall in love soo fast but I guess the actual story starts later on, right? cuz u have To make a background story story and stuff. Anyway ur story is good! Well the first chp is anyway :P
| Midnight.Moonlight.Mirage chapter 26 . 4/28/2013
I really enjoyed reading this story. However, it really did make me anxious about becoming a lawyer, myself. Hahah I always worried about situations like that! I'm so happy everyone got their happy ending, and I absolutely love when authors include little kids in their stories, as opposed to getting the main character pregnant(clicheee). I loveddd chris, and I love how nora was strong character. Greeat story :)
| Andramion chapter 26 . 2/20/2013
I started reading this story this afternoon. It is now half past ten in the evening and I think I have only paused for half an hour or so to have dinner.
I loved it. Absolutely and thoroughly loved it.
I enjoyed the fact that it wasn't just a do-it-for-the-bet-but-fall-in-love story. It was great that the setting was years later, that the characters had grown up so much, were strong personas on their own.
I liked that it wasn't just about Nora and Jack, that Travis' point of view was included and that you didn't just skim over the idea of a case. The case was more than just a backdrop for the story, which made the story so much better.
Even though there were several grammatical or spelling mistakes, they didn't bother me (which they normally really do). Your writing style is very good and the story had a good flow to it. It sounds a little head-in-the-clouds-hippy-esque, but it didn't feel like you had to force the story at any point, if that makes any sense.
My heart swelled with the cute romance between Travis and Emily, Alex's pure goodness when it came to being Travis' friend. It was so sad to see how scared and hurt Travis really was, how badly he wanted to do well in school, how badly he wanted friends, sports, the girl and all those things he didn't have before. I cried on the inside a bit for the poor little boy that grew up without parents and was thrown into a world of crime without knowing how to handle the situation. I'm so glad he found his way.
I thought little Chris was wise beyond his years and thought it was immensely cute when he asked Nora whether he could call her mama. To me, that was the most touching moment in the story.
And Jack, oh Jack, could there be a more perfect beau for a romance story? I think any girl in the world would want the person who hurt them so long ago declare they've been in love with you ever since way back when.
I am usually a little cautious when it comes to sequels or spin-offs, but I can't wait to get started on this one.
So basically I'm saying: well done you, don't stop writing!
| saritta chapter 19 . 9/27/2012
JEEZ! How much fucking estrogen does this guy (jack) have in his system! He acts like such a chick!
| Ngoc1231 chapter 27 . 9/2/2012
Aww this was a really cute story! I kinda started to miss Chris near the end and some of the other lovely characters that were mentioned in the beginning of the story but Travis totally stole the show after him getting place into Jack's house.
| The Quotidian Life chapter 27 . 8/15/2012
I really enjoyed it. It was well written and the storyline was great. There were some spelling mistakes but as one of your comments said: you weren't good at editing, so that's okay. In the end, I kinda guessed that it was Jack's ex who planned the attack on Nora. But that's me, I read into things alot.
Overall, I really enjoyed this story.
| marshak chapter 18 . 5/21/2012
Wow! Amanda totally reminds me of a creepy psycho stalker! I hope Nora decides to stay in the house with Jack. They make such a nice family with the two kids and the workers (feels kinda wrong to call them servants). I almost thought that Nora was going to ask if Travis would stay in the house and keep going to his new school after his trial is over. I hope that he does so he can have a better, safer life.