|Reviews for Underground Society|
| Classy Broad chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Interesting, this is the first scifi story I've ever read to tell you the truth so dunno If I can give you any useful suggestions in this genre :P
Ok found a few errors (i think):
in the second paragraph: "we were more ready then expected." , correct me if Im wrong but I think "then" should be "than"
Ok in the second paragraph the action scenes were great but it's kinda moving a little too fast for me but I loved your descriptions in the third paragraph onwards it's a bit gory but hey, I love gore :D
Love the speech the president made btw. Overall it's really interesting, my only other rant is it's very short but since this is just the beginning I think there's tons of improvement in the second chapter
| rara saryn chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Good start. Is there going to be more?
| SirScott chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
I guess we'll have a different President then the one we have now. I really can't picture any modern President standing up to the invaders himself. Overall, a pretty good start.
I'll have to check back in when you update.