Reviews for Indian Summer |
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![]() ![]() Great plot the only really big problem u had was adding unsuccessful information(like information that wasn't important in that part of the story)other than that and a few mistakes in grammer and spelling it was a good story :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maybe it's just me but the website won't let me in or the page doesn't exist. Help? |
![]() ![]() ![]() God your story is awesome, Couple of and spelling mistakes but otherwise great |
![]() ![]() ![]() rly loved this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() wtf...i was trying to look for this story just to you know- re-read it :D when i found it wasn't in my favorite stories list...i was devastating, desperately brousing the net for it ! of course i had forgotten the name of the story...so my cause was hopeless. until i ran across one of your other story :D i wanted to read it, so i went onto your profile, for i don't know why. and found INDIAN SUMMER ! IT'S FATE I TELL YOU- FATE ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is a good plot, but I think you could work on making your sentnce, and paragraphs longer |
![]() ![]() ![]() URGGG, this story was so perfect ! AHH I love it. . they had the undenialable acttraction which I LOVEEEE, she was so witty and clever, he was so cocky and (i find that very hot). their sexual chemistry WAS HOOTT WHICH I LOVEDDDD. And there wasnt too much drama, and wasnt too little drama :D a |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is really more entertaining than i thought it would be. buen trabajo :) |
![]() ![]() So I just read the entire thing while at work (I should so be fired already). It was cute. Hated the amber chick from the moment we met her... Blake was totally cheating on her in Cali and has no grounds to call her a whore... Gr. Stupid boys. Nice job :) |
![]() ![]() aw |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah. boy. I feel as if this ending was kina rushed. It was sweet, but kina rushed. DEMO; it was a good story and i enjoyed it. Kudos $*Aradia Cloud*$ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Isabella needs to make her fucking mind. Either she's with Blake or with Chase. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm... this Amber person is already getting under my skin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg i absolutly loved the story and the ending i almost cried lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() really liking this story |