|Reviews for Apathy and Ignorance|
| Enchanted Starrlite chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
Firstly, i hate to put down any poetry, but it is quite awkward considering there are no breaks and at intervals the beginning of words are capitalized, which adds to the inconsistency. The line breaks in poetry do add to the train of thought of the writer and without them it, it isn't really poetry. I do believe that although you may have good ideas and thoughts, it would be easier to display them through the natural flow of poetry. Otherwise, good luck in your writing ventures. )
| Miregalo chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
You should really space out the stanzas and lines.