that was amazingly awsum! :) so well written - i can't even tell you! it flowed so well - all the lines wove together with one another perfectly! i loved it, there was so much feeling and heartbreak that is so relatable to me. well done!

bueno amiga, es muy bonita. you seem to know about what I'd like to say sometimes.

it's a good poem, but who was it written for?

Beautiful.

"And know

That your empty hand

Could have been holding mine"

I love the repitition you had with that. Great piece, although I thought the saying went, "Getting the wrong end of the stick," or "pulling the short straw." But yeah, that could just be me. Hehe