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  strangebrew chapter 1 . 5/11/2009 I've been a lurking reader of your stuff for a while, and while I love all of your writing, I must say this collection in particular blew me away. Everything fits so perfectly and all of the descriptions are wonderful :). Keep up the amazing work! |
 all you need is oxygen chapter 4 . 5/11/2009 i like the idea of hiding passion in pockets. these fit together so well. i've never heard of anything like this. it's so creative. (: |
| all you need is oxygen chapter 3 . 5/11/2009 this one was... a little short. i feel like you could have elaborated and turned it into a much longer piece. it's an amazing opening, but it needs the follow through. |
| sharks don't sleep chapter 3 . 5/10/2009 This chapter is my favorite so far... |
| not just a pretty face chapter 1 . 5/9/2009 i didn't even see the pennames, nice work |
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 5/9/2009 Cool idea. :) I even know who all you're talking about, which is really neat. And you've managed to write something really interesting, too. Really cool. Keep writing! :) |
| a silenced revolution chapter 2 . 5/8/2009 really cool, original idea. and it doesn't seem forced, either. nicely done. |
| all you need is oxygen chapter 1 . 5/8/2009 this is very clever stuff. they fit together so well, i almost didn't see the pennames. |