Reviews for this could have been about you
strangebrew chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
I've been a lurking reader of your stuff for a while, and while I love all of your writing, I must say this collection in particular blew me away. Everything fits so perfectly and all of the descriptions are wonderful :). Keep up the amazing work!
all you need is oxygen chapter 4 . 5/11/2009
i like the idea of hiding passion in pockets.

these fit together so well. i've never heard of anything like this. it's so creative.

(:
all you need is oxygen chapter 3 . 5/11/2009
this one was... a little short.

i feel like you could have elaborated and turned it into a much longer piece.

it's an amazing opening, but it needs the follow through.
sharks don't sleep chapter 3 . 5/10/2009
This chapter is my favorite so far...
not just a pretty face chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
i didn't even see the pennames, nice work
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
Cool idea. :) I even know who all you're talking about, which is really neat. And you've managed to write something really interesting, too. Really cool. Keep writing! :)
a silenced revolution chapter 2 . 5/8/2009
really cool, original idea. and it doesn't seem forced, either. nicely done.
all you need is oxygen chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
this is very clever stuff.

they fit together so well, i almost didn't see the pennames.
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