|Reviews for this could have been about you|
| myturntobebrave chapter 4 . 7/2/2009
AHAHAHA that's my penname! Oh my God!
There's a smile on my face now.
| stolen hugs chapter 21 . 6/29/2009
great formatting. (:
| Little girl Big world chapter 21 . 6/27/2009
These lines, "she leaves flaming footprints
and gasoline rainbows
to burn our city." just wonderful!
| kissing walls chapter 21 . 6/27/2009
You have no idea how happy this made me!
It's simple fantastic. The formatting, the word choice...everything.
And it's dedicated to ME!
Thank you so so so much!
| kissing walls chapter 19 . 6/25/2009
The last part is breathtaking and unexpected. This chapter is definitly one of my favorites!
| kissing walls chapter 18 . 6/25/2009
We all need a little spite, yeah?
| kissing walls chapter 17 . 6/25/2009
Ending's awesome. So devastating and apathetic.
| kissing walls chapter 16 . 6/25/2009
I think the formats great. And I agree with the message in general.
The world has a lot of changing to do.
| kissing walls chapter 15 . 6/25/2009
I like the title a lot, and the story this tells. Splitting paths is so traumatizing - and beautifully symbolic.
| kissing walls chapter 14 . 6/25/2009
This is probably my favorite (so far). Not just for the "soar away" part (though that is, obviously, stunning) but for, again, the word choice, and the flawless phrases.
| kissing walls chapter 13 . 6/25/2009
Your excellent word choice really shines through in this one. I don't think I'll ever get the phrase "stale spanish lullabies and forsaken fireflies" out of my head, it just has such a ring.
| kissing walls chapter 12 . 6/25/2009
The formatting is priceless and extremely clever. Much props!
| kissing walls chapter 11 . 6/25/2009
It's so pretty it almost sparkles :)
| kissing walls chapter 10 . 6/25/2009
Like the first stanza quite a bit.
| kissing walls chapter 9 . 6/25/2009
Steamy poems are everyone's (not so) guilty pleasure, I should think