Reviews for this could have been about you
myturntobebrave chapter 4 . 7/2/2009
AHAHAHA that's my penname! Oh my God!

There's a smile on my face now.
stolen hugs chapter 21 . 6/29/2009
great formatting. (:
Little girl Big world chapter 21 . 6/27/2009
These lines, "she leaves flaming footprints

and gasoline rainbows

to burn our city." just wonderful!
kissing walls chapter 21 . 6/27/2009



You have no idea how happy this made me!

It's simple fantastic. The formatting, the word choice...everything.

And it's dedicated to ME!

Thank you so so so much!
kissing walls chapter 19 . 6/25/2009
The last part is breathtaking and unexpected. This chapter is definitly one of my favorites!
kissing walls chapter 18 . 6/25/2009


We all need a little spite, yeah?
kissing walls chapter 17 . 6/25/2009
Ending's awesome. So devastating and apathetic.
kissing walls chapter 16 . 6/25/2009
I think the formats great. And I agree with the message in general.

The world has a lot of changing to do.
kissing walls chapter 15 . 6/25/2009
I like the title a lot, and the story this tells. Splitting paths is so traumatizing - and beautifully symbolic.
kissing walls chapter 14 . 6/25/2009
This is probably my favorite (so far). Not just for the "soar away" part (though that is, obviously, stunning) but for, again, the word choice, and the flawless phrases.
kissing walls chapter 13 . 6/25/2009
Your excellent word choice really shines through in this one. I don't think I'll ever get the phrase "stale spanish lullabies and forsaken fireflies" out of my head, it just has such a ring.
kissing walls chapter 12 . 6/25/2009
The formatting is priceless and extremely clever. Much props!
kissing walls chapter 11 . 6/25/2009 sweet.

It's so pretty it almost sparkles :)
kissing walls chapter 10 . 6/25/2009

Like the first stanza quite a bit.
kissing walls chapter 9 . 6/25/2009
Steamy poems are everyone's (not so) guilty pleasure, I should think
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