| Reviews for this could have been about you |
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   myturntobebrave chapter 4 . 7/2/2009 AHAHAHA that's my penname! Oh my God! There's a smile on my face now. |
| stolen hugs chapter 21 . 6/29/2009 great formatting. (: |
| Little girl Big world chapter 21 . 6/27/2009 These lines, "she leaves flaming footprints and gasoline rainbows to burn our city." just wonderful! |
| kissing walls chapter 21 . 6/27/2009 :D :D :D You have no idea how happy this made me! It's simple fantastic. The formatting, the word choice...everything. And it's dedicated to ME! Thank you so so so much! |
| kissing walls chapter 19 . 6/25/2009 The last part is breathtaking and unexpected. This chapter is definitly one of my favorites! |
| kissing walls chapter 18 . 6/25/2009 Vicious! Yay! We all need a little spite, yeah? |
| kissing walls chapter 17 . 6/25/2009 Ending's awesome. So devastating and apathetic. |
| kissing walls chapter 16 . 6/25/2009 I think the formats great. And I agree with the message in general. The world has a lot of changing to do. |
| kissing walls chapter 15 . 6/25/2009 I like the title a lot, and the story this tells. Splitting paths is so traumatizing - and beautifully symbolic. |
| kissing walls chapter 14 . 6/25/2009 This is probably my favorite (so far). Not just for the "soar away" part (though that is, obviously, stunning) but for, again, the word choice, and the flawless phrases. |
| kissing walls chapter 13 . 6/25/2009 Your excellent word choice really shines through in this one. I don't think I'll ever get the phrase "stale spanish lullabies and forsaken fireflies" out of my head, it just has such a ring. |
| kissing walls chapter 12 . 6/25/2009 The formatting is priceless and extremely clever. Much props! |
| kissing walls chapter 11 . 6/25/2009 Aw...so sweet. It's so pretty it almost sparkles :) |
| kissing walls chapter 10 . 6/25/2009 Beautiful. Like the first stanza quite a bit. |
| kissing walls chapter 9 . 6/25/2009 Steamy poems are everyone's (not so) guilty pleasure, I should think |