|Reviews for this could have been about you|
| kissing walls chapter 8 . 6/25/2009
Amazing, as always.
I'm in love with the fourth and fifth stanzas.
| kissing walls chapter 7 . 6/25/2009
I feel like I'm repeating myself (and I'm not even half-way through!) But I'm determined to review every chapter because this is THE best collection ever in my opinion.
This is suprisingly uplifting but kind of sad at the same time. At first it's hard to find a connection between everything, but when you really think about it, everything comes together.
| kissing walls chapter 6 . 6/25/2009
But in a way, hasn't everyone already sh-sh-shattered?
Oh, where is the world going, nowadays?
Again, great snippet. Makes me think, which I suprisingly rather enjoy.
| kissing walls chapter 5 . 6/25/2009
Best three-line poem I've ever read :D
| kissing walls chapter 4 . 6/25/2009
Empowerment! I guess is what I feel when I read this. Like losing, but still reaching for the win.
I really like the "passion in our pockets" part, and "a(n already) silenced revolution"
| kissing walls chapter 3 . 6/25/2009
So short, yet so tragic.
And the title is just awesome.
| kissing walls chapter 2 . 6/25/2009
I'm so fond of the whole thing, I can't even pick which stanza is my favorite. It just has such an interesting feel to it.
| kissing walls chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
Okay, not even going to try to find the pennames...
I love this poem because it feels classic. Like I could pull it out of gandmother's attic and blow the dust off the letters and read it in a cushy old-fashioned armchair.
| in the city of neon and chrome chapter 20 . 6/14/2009
somewhere (perhaps at the very end?) you should post a list of all the pennames you used. i saw some of them, but i'm curious as to what i missed. ]
| in the city of neon and chrome chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
the entire thing is genius. beautifully written.
| kissing walls chapter 20 . 6/13/2009
All the poems in this collection are honestly amazing - I truly hope you keep it up!
| Little girl Big world chapter 20 . 6/13/2009
Shadows of a trackless sea is my new favorite in this collection. I love the formatting you did with drag me down and the last stanza about the metaphorical parachute. Great job!
| for shame chapter 19 . 6/11/2009
this is my new favorite piece.
you and your amazing formatting!
| stolen hugs chapter 19 . 6/11/2009
oh, your formatting. it woos me constantly. (:
fantastic job on the poem!
| Little girl Big world chapter 18 . 6/11/2009
I'm staying updated with this group of poems because they just astound me with the subject matter, word choice, and formatting. You have so many poems and they are all so different. It's a lovely talent and you have a gift for writing! Can't wait to read more :)