Reviews for Hopeless Romance
K. Weaver chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
I like how this poem rhymes, and yet I don't think it's cliche. I like it a lot! Especially the last two lines. I also really like the eleventh and twelfth line. I think maybe the thirteenth line could be strengthened, so that it is as powerful and unique as the other lines. (which may be difficult, while keeping in the rhyming) But otherwise I enjoyed reading this.