|Reviews for Twitchy|
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/4/2014
Yyyyyyaaaaaaaaayyyyyyy! This is so cute! I love the unlikely hero. Well done darling.
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/15/2012
This is the second time I've read this, and it's just really good. I'm kind of tempted to say that the relationship between Johnny and Honey develops too quickly, but it somehow makes sense. I also like the gang business - did you do research on it? The gang dynamics are simple and understandable yet believable.
There could be a little more slang, considering it's a period piece. That would set it very nicely, plus old slang is always a lot of fun! :P
Thanks for this! I love it! :D
| maxineee chapter 14 . 6/11/2011
That was a really good story, though I'm kind of flabbergasted. LOL. I'm happy it's a happy ending, but she should've died! O_O Really. Haha, I loved it though. It was awesome. :D
| shutterbaby chapter 14 . 6/21/2009
Wow I thought this was such a good read...until the ending. Nothing was tied up! They said 'I love you', then...nothing. He said the gang was over, but then what? Casey's still around. What about Honey's uncle? She can't leave town, and if Casey's there, they would still be in danger even if they get married. Especially if they have kids, right?
This story still calls for an epiloge, or maybe even a sequel.
| 123HSMluver chapter 14 . 6/3/2009
That was cute!
| 123HSMluver chapter 13 . 5/31/2009
| Danielle Gin chapter 13 . 5/31/2009
Oh no! What's going to happen? I can't wait to find out!
| 123HSMluver chapter 12 . 5/30/2009
Poor Honey :(
| 123HSMluver chapter 11 . 5/27/2009
I loved that he was at her door :P
Twas awesome :D:D
| 123HSMluver chapter 10 . 5/24/2009
Poor Johnny! He got kicked out. I love the whole " He wanted to scare her in order to scare me in order to scare you" LOL Aha
Loved it :D
| 123HSMluver chapter 9 . 5/22/2009
I love fluff :D
You know I do:P
| Danielle Gin chapter 8 . 5/22/2009
Oh! Wow! Talk about a turning point in the story! Between Dan and Casey, Honey is in some serious danger! I can't wait to read more and find out of she'll be okay and if she and Johnny can be together! Fantastic job and happy writing!
| Danielle Gin chapter 3 . 5/22/2009
I can't tell you how many times I went, "AW!" while reading this chapter! It was just so sweet! But I am really glad that you didn't have it move smoothly for the two love birds throughout the entire thing! That awkwardness and the mild insults were exactly what the scene needed to be more believable with the rest of the story. I can't wait to read more! Great job!
| 123HSMluver chapter 8 . 5/20/2009
I hate Casey -_-
| Danielle Gin chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
Your writing style is superb! Really, it fit very well with the times and I could only catch a few grammatical mistakes! Your characters seem to be extremely well developed, too! Johnny seems to be just such a loveable character and I’m interested in seeing where his relationship with Honey goes. Also, your descriptions were top notch! Really, I got a fantastic feel of the setting. I can’t wait to read more! Great job and happy writing!