Reviews for Tomorrow I Die
dail-of-the-air chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
Excellent meter in this one, though the rhyme pattern is somewhat lost after the first two lines. Good emotional expression; angst comes out much better in poetry than in prose. This is one of the best suicide poems that I've ever read.
Louis Denair chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
Very inspired. If it's only God that can stop you, I think you will be fantastically successful.
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
this is powerful

and i like that it's in the form of prose almost.

nice job, keep writing!