|Reviews for Max, giving a violin lesson on Tuesday|
| starwatcher chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
great story, i used to teach violin for a few years. Makes me remember those days...
| Around.about chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
I've been following your work for awhile now, and I'm glad to see this sudden outbursts of creativity. You've always had a simple elegance and word choice that I do admire. I hope to see more from you.
| Isca chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
The opening line is very striking. Your use of kenning with 'child-fingers' added an innocence to the poem.
Max's words are laced with kindness-showing that a child must be treated with respect and honour. I liked that. Although, near the end his words shift to orders, which showed his impatient side.
The ending was good. You used a question. Nice. It's thought-provoking. :)
| Dale Christopher chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
I can really see you having a moment like this. It seemed perfectly natural and had just a hint of smile to it. Very well written.