Does anyone know where I can read this story? It sounds so good!

Beautiful.

This is the first fictionpress story that has made me cry, your writing portrayed such emotion that I realy identified with all the characters. They were all so believable as well, none of them cardboard cutout cliches, one dimensional but seemingly real. I really hope you weren't writing from personal experience, in a coincidence I watched Lovely Bones yesterday, if you haven't watched or read it you really should.

This was a gripping and realistic story, thank you I enjoyed it (if that is the right word and I am not so sure) emmensly and it will stay with me for a long time. This is definately worthy of print and if you do get it published consider this a pre-order!

xx

Aw! Such a cute story! This story really struck a cord in me, because I was always the pessimist (or as I liked to call it realist) and think that something bad was always going to happen to someone somewhere, you just don't know what until it happens. Alos, there was just a story in the news about a guy who tried to take a little girl from the movie theater bathroom this week, and this was a few days after I had started reading this story! I thought that was such a weird coincidence! But the girl is safe thanks to security cameras!

I love all of the feeling I really got out of this story! I could feel Rena's pain and sorrow throughout the whole thing! Honestly, I probably was close to tears at least twice. And I really love how she had all of these people that were always there to help her through everything, but she wouldn't even realize it until she finally took that chance to risk heartbreak! Aww! Sorry I'm such a sap for these types of stories! Anyways, good luck writing and with life and everything! LOVE THE STORY!

Love,

MintCcIceCream

PS: I'm really sorry if I bored you with my incessant babbling!

wow, this is a brilliant piece of work! i dont understand why you have less than 500 reviews because you definitely deserve more. this story brings out emotions people dont usually deal with daily and thats a very good thing.

Love this story. It made me cry. It was awesome, I felt like I was her. Very well done!)

great story so far. i like how you made her unpoplur now. can't wait to see what happens now. i'm going to try to read more this week, but idk. i have finals this week, can't wait until they are over. i will try to finish ur story over christmas break.

Wow. This is incredible. I'm honestly on the verge of tears here.

This, by far, is one of my favorite stories you've written thus far. :)

This is probably one of the

best stories I have ever read.

Not only did it have a good

plot and was well-written, but

it really touched my heart.

I cried about 5 times, and

I felt like I really connected

with the characters. You are

an awesome writer! :)

This was amazing... i'm at lost for words at how much i enjoyed this story your a great writer and i love your style... Keep up the writing

Aww last two chapters brought tears, Rena's admission and essay were so heartbreaking

I'm liking this story so far. Haha the skaters are amusing i love them. I like the names Rena Gina and Regina's like a mix of the two lol

It's kinda late for me here in Denmark right now and I should be going to bed, but I needed to review this before I go.. I cried here in the end, for Camille and all her family, I really liked the 'essay' too, made me cry even more.. I don't know if you have watched Twilight, but the ending sorta reminds me of the song Bella's Lullaby.. Just a thought .

Hugs!

This was an amazingly good story. I don't know how you wrote the story, cuz it made me want to cry at some parts. mostly with rena and her sister and all of that. it just made me sad.

but the story was good. ]

so keep up the good writing.

I think most people (thankfully) have not gone through this much trauma. Something similiar (as in something that could bring the same sadness/hurt into play, nothing about missing people, etc, or illnesses) happened to my older brother and everyone expected me to sit and wallow in front of everyone, but to be honest, you just don't. I think the way you described Rena was really realistic and of course everything always needs a little work, but who cares. I loved this story a lot, a lot! And like how rena changed completely from friends to habits, the same happened to me. I guess in my own way it's more of relation to how I felt so it seemed real and other people might not feel the same way in a situation like that. But overall great story :)