|Reviews for You Don't Know Me|
| Sakina the Fallen Angel chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Wow, I loved the power the words of the poem held at the end, and also the way you built up the character's life through her memories. Maybe try starting sentences with something other than "I" to add variety, and maybe you should put the poem in italics for added effect...
Sakina, from the Roadhouse forum on the Beer Run x
| Lilacs.on.a.fence chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
I liked it.
very dark and such.
the flames added a lot to the fic.
I felt that her pain was a bit...one sided.
But it is also really hard to come up with a sort of pain that has not already been done before.