|Reviews for Kissing is for Losers|
| lol chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
Dont know why I kept seeing the female lead as paris hilton lol! Probably with the way she was described she seemed to me like a paris hilton character sometimes haha!(though I dont and never will like paris :$) Glad she has opened up to kissing and not just random fucks, its so weird to say that.
| heal me forever chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
wow dat was sweet nd he actually tamed herr good one :)
| theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
I really... really... love this...
| rereader chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
You most definitely need to right a longer story with this type of chemistry. It would be great. You really built the tension quite well. I'm excited to read some of your other stuff! Nice job.
| Aaerie chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
hahaha i should try making a bet like that
| Pinkamoo chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
Not so bad, not so bad :p Strange things she compared kissing to, though. Aren't swirls the same things as fireworks? It's all figurative anyway. But I liked! So nice work.
| Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
Considering you're still learning English, this is really good English. I think you just need a beta to comb through it, though, since some wrong words are used (though I get what you're trying to say).
Very cliche but also cute and damn they have a lot of chemistry. XD I'm very glad woodstock1969 added this to our c2. (:
| anita darling chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
This was really cute. Good job. _
Sometimes, I wonder if people who are learning English as a second language, are better at writing than those who have known and learned English their whole lives.
Seeing as if you learn English as a second language, speaking and writing will be grammatically correct, and it will be a habit. Whereas if we have known English our whole lives, we pick up habits and speak incorrectly.
It was brilliant. Especially for someone who is learning English as a second language (which sort of contradicts what I just said...but, who cares).
I loved it. I am going to favourite it for you. :)
| SparklingStar25 chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
That was really good..
liked it a lott!
| Float a Boat chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
I really enjoyed this and it had a good flow to it. It was very creative and I love the relationship between them. Jed sounds really sweet. I also loved how you had same rules for both genders. I hate stories about how the girl is so innocent and the guy never is. It is very refreshing to read a story that is real. You did a great job for someone learning English. There were some words that were odd for example you used intensive and I think intense would have been better. This is definitely going on my favorites.
| buzzgirl37 chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
Rating - 9 :)
It's very sweet, I really liked it and it was very well written. And about the spelling mistakes I don't really think I saw any...apart from the word thrust instead of trust but I think that it adds humour :)
| hellohellolove chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
you're in the process of learning english? wow, never would have guessed. And I thought the story was sweet xD
| x3life chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
aw this was so cute )
| OoohLookACat chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
i like it
it's got a very good plot line
and although there are some mistakes
it's understable because you're still learning english :)
i liked it though
i liked it a lot :)
| saraelle chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Amazing story !
Its like nothing i've ever read before :)
I love it .
Love and support ;