Reviews for Kissing is for Losers
lol chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
Dont know why I kept seeing the female lead as paris hilton lol! Probably with the way she was described she seemed to me like a paris hilton character sometimes haha!(though I dont and never will like paris :$) Glad she has opened up to kissing and not just random fucks, its so weird to say that.
heal me forever chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
wow dat was sweet nd he actually tamed herr good one :)
theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
I really... really... love this...
rereader chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
You most definitely need to right a longer story with this type of chemistry. It would be great. You really built the tension quite well. I'm excited to read some of your other stuff! Nice job.
Aaerie chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
hahaha i should try making a bet like that
Pinkamoo chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
Not so bad, not so bad :p Strange things she compared kissing to, though. Aren't swirls the same things as fireworks? It's all figurative anyway. But I liked! So nice work.
Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
Considering you're still learning English, this is really good English. I think you just need a beta to comb through it, though, since some wrong words are used (though I get what you're trying to say).

Very cliche but also cute and damn they have a lot of chemistry. XD I'm very glad woodstock1969 added this to our c2. (:
anita darling chapter 1 . 5/15/2009

This was really cute. Good job. _

Sometimes, I wonder if people who are learning English as a second language, are better at writing than those who have known and learned English their whole lives.

Seeing as if you learn English as a second language, speaking and writing will be grammatically correct, and it will be a habit. Whereas if we have known English our whole lives, we pick up habits and speak incorrectly.

It was brilliant. Especially for someone who is learning English as a second language (which sort of contradicts what I just said...but, who cares).

I loved it. I am going to favourite it for you. :)
SparklingStar25 chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
That was really good..

liked it a lott!
Float a Boat chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
I really enjoyed this and it had a good flow to it. It was very creative and I love the relationship between them. Jed sounds really sweet. I also loved how you had same rules for both genders. I hate stories about how the girl is so innocent and the guy never is. It is very refreshing to read a story that is real. You did a great job for someone learning English. There were some words that were odd for example you used intensive and I think intense would have been better. This is definitely going on my favorites.
buzzgirl37 chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
Rating - 9 :)

It's very sweet, I really liked it and it was very well written. And about the spelling mistakes I don't really think I saw any...apart from the word thrust instead of trust but I think that it adds humour :)
hellohellolove chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
you're in the process of learning english? wow, never would have guessed. And I thought the story was sweet xD
x3life chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
aw this was so cute )
OoohLookACat chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
i like it

it's got a very good plot line

and although there are some mistakes

it's understable because you're still learning english :)

i liked it though

i liked it a lot :)

saraelle chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Amazing story !

Its like nothing i've ever read before :)

I love it .

Love and support ;

saraelle .
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