Reviews for That Perfect Smile
Cassie1521 chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
I can totally relate to this, cute poem. Loved it!
Ms. Poe chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Aw, what a cute poem - and so relatable, too. Just reading it gives you a good feeling inside. I love it. :)
SuzyJane chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Makes me want to smile at someone to brighten up their day if only for a second :) Great job!
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
Sweet, simple and straight-forward! Most importantly relate-able. I liked the line "for one second the world revolves around you,".

Nice twist at the end - the sweeter you made the first part, the more evil the ending seems. Well done.

fleur
123HSMluver chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
Oh wow I LOVED that last line! Amazing!
Said Author chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
Lovely! :}