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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I love Aaron at the end of the chapter. He's so funny! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aaron is my new #2 favorite character in this story! |
![]() ![]() OMFG you are a hilariously good writter, i just read the whole thing all the way through and i think i'm in love. Youre amazingly creative. Beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() I simply adored this chapter, pure genius, very funny. And totally the reaction I would have to Nick, loving Aaron too. JM |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You get a saturday taken away from you every snow day? LAME! moving on, i really liked it, but why did she get so pissed? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I died laughing because some of the things that they did...priceless. Alrighty, onto the stuff that makes people want to punch you in the face (my friend's words and not mine). Comas are tricky so when you're editing read the sentences with pauses and longer pauses when a comas shows up. If it sounds stupid get rid of it. I suggest if that fails then try reading your sentences out loud and pause with EACH COMA. IF IT SOUNDS STUPID, DELETE IT. Oh, and one more thing, ASHKITTENHappy me. :D Stella |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD shes been kidnapped! Uh yea, by you! And then she KILLED NICK! WOOT! Im all for it, that was awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back! Congrats on being the most traumatizing cliffhanger leaveree. Not cool. Update soon! She stoof up to Nick and that was great! Aaron is humorous! |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASEPLEASE UPDATE ASAP! I LOVE AARON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i hope u ace ur exams. this story rocks and nick is really creepy. |
![]() ![]() i totally understand you i have exams ths week qne next week and im dieing but i love your story some chapters you said you hat but i love them please update as soon as you can thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() :o that shower!...its ducho in spanish. always learning something new _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahahaha stalking... my favorite pasttime |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think Nick is evil, haha. Update soon! |