|Reviews for Velociraptor Melody|
| Isca chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
The second stanza is very profound. I like your use of religious elements. The opposition between blood and water is interesting.
| Alexielle chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
This is really a nice poem. I like the metaphor of the velociraptor - that was actually what attracted my attention, I never thought of reading the name of a species of dinosaur in a romantic poem - as I consider it quite creative and ingenious.
My favorite part would have to be
"Allow me to repeat the same mistakes
I am just another velociraptor, I mutter
On the hunt for a broken heart
Since the one I have just aches and aches"
as I find that it describes perfectly the human nature.
| BleedingXXXLove chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
what the fuck ?