Reviews for Five Senses of My World
J.J.The Juvenile Delinquent chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
This poem is amazingly wonderful it's so creative and quirky. It makes me want someone who will make the world change for me like that "sighs" but it's not likely to happen so I'll just keep on dreaming anyway. Good poem keep it up.

sincerely me
watch.wolf chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
well done. i really like the idea.
Wordlove chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
That was great. The warm/harm rhyme sort of threw of the rhythm to me but I really did think that this was a great idea and I loved the imagery. Great job.