Reviews for My Prince Charming
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
I really loved all the literary references in this poem. It took your sense of longing and made it even more relatable to the reader.

However, I found the tone of the poem to be quite naive. I'm not a believer in perfect endings and fairy tales so the sense of "unfairness" is not one that I agree with.

But overall, I liked this poem. Well written! Great work and keep it up!
bvwpeanut chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
Very sweet! I can really relate to it alot, which makes me like it even more!
SpottedStar chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
I love the Shakespeare/Disney reference, that kinda stuff makes me really envision the poem.

I can relate I've been going through those same feelings lately.

SpottedStar :)
CuriousContradiction chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Wow. I haven't checked back on your profile for awhile. I'm glad I read this poem. :)

And I like this poem a lot because I can definitely relate to it.

My favorite line: "Even Belle had her beast." Haha.

There's just so much longing and wishing and yearning in this poem. Great work. I hope you get your prince :)
Blak-Raven chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
aww..this is sweet 3

it seems to be the reverse of my poem "fairytales" as well :D
lookin4nemo chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
Oh i hear ya on this one! great work! and i know EXACTLY what you mean!