Reviews for Evolving More Openly |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed the story but I found Tommy's behaviour really annoying after a while. He was the one who wanted to be more than just friends in the first place yet every time there was a problem, he started avoiding Kevin instead of dealing with it. And then to top it off he breaks up with him because of some stupid rumours. Kevin's parents were also very confusing. At first, they appeared not to give a damn about their son, then after his suicide attempt they acted as if they cared and finally, they threw him out because he told them he was gay. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Umm, I like the story, I really do...but the characters seem very...well, bluntly...basic. There's nothing to them thats particularly exciting. Nobody calls themselves an emo unless they're a poser. I mean, your writning is really good, awsome even, but I just feel that your characters are really 'by-the-book" |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey i absolutley luv ur story...XD, i am actualey writting one myself maybe you could read it please? -thanks xxAnEmo'sLuvxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa, the number of reviews totally fooled me! This is a very great story! I read this in, like, 6 hours without getting up from the chair! Now I'm hungry XD Kevin is totally my favorite character :D You never told us what happened to Vincent though. Is he end up gay and having relationship with that pedo coach? (ack) and Mr Peter! I wish my Economic teacher is like him *sighs* Overall, thank you for taking time writing this, I'm definitely in love with it. Oh, just to let you know, I'm going to stalk your other story now :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... The part about everyone calling him a fag and wanting to beat him up pisses me off, but the rest was good. :o) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mmm... It is kind of obvious that Tommy likes Kevin. This is a good story. :o) |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwww love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG i so agree with the hole valentine's day thing and hahaah i love Sammy |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww i love tommy he's so cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww thats cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very good story. I think the reason that people could like it is becuase they can connect to it, such as myself. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG. |
![]() ![]() OH MY GOSH was amazing I really felt all the characters pain because of the great description used, really touched me. Will definately check out your other stories ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this story is complete, but I just want to tell you how great it is. Good job and happy writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story, becuz its realistic. i never really liked fantasy stories or watever. i've always loved realistic fiction. i mean, in real life, someone can change another person. some people can really hav an effect on other people. i just loved this so much. this is my 4th time reading this story, actually :] |