|Reviews for The Beach|
| bvwpeanut chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
This poem had such a peaceful tone! It reminded me of when I was at the beach a few weeks ago! Very nice!
| Scarlett Water Immortal chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
That makes me want to be at th beach. Wah!
P.S. beware of evil screensavers with eyes their everywhere!
| kyox88 chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
this poem give me the sense of smooth and calm~~really~~but i think it would add up more feelings if you make a few lines shorter, just bring it down~
| AngelaRochelle chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
I loved this because it made me really feel like I was at the beach. Great imagery. And my favorite line is the one that seems to sort of have a theme: "Then while I walk I hear how peaceful and quiet it is like the worlds shut up for one second"
| Cadie Rose chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
| Aomera chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
m nice gentle piece, great use of the senses. Think you've got a typo in the second line - meant to be shivers?
LOVE your picture btw (the rainbow pencils) I may have stolen it to save on my computer!