Well, to start off with, that was an amazing chapter. Long, and full of great dialogue that was funny or appealing. I am literally surprised that you only have one review when you deserve a HUNDRED talking about your great style. The starting sentence was wonderful and it really shows your 'style' the whole way through. I may sound like a movie critic, but I'm actually saying the truth from the bottom of my heart because truthfully- I already love it. Please continue, and keep writing away...

RAWR!

SO...your behind me...but I shall do this anyway (:

I liked this...a lot. Just to let you know :)

I'd highlight stuff, and tell you exactly what I liked, but...i dont get your laptop keyboard, so i wont.

haha, sorry. xD

but...it was good. Really good. :D I cant wait to see ... \\ READ more. xD

so...hurry up and update.

mkai?

kayy.

:D

xoxoxo;

Faith. :]