Lol. This is strangely humorous and funny. I was waiting for the “Did you kill these women?” “Yes. I did it officer. Lock me up, I shot them dead.” “…They were strangled.” “Oh… Right, I meant that," but okay. I read it three times already and each time it has me cracking up. Anyway, I really enjoying reading this.

Please update.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :)

I feel bad for him...

can't wait to see what's next...

PLEASE tell me this story wasn't discontinued...*puppy-eyes*

What a great start! And I loved the summary! '"Did you kill these women?" "Yes. I did it officer. Lock me up, I shot them dead." "…They were strangled." "Oh… Right, I meant that." 'Briliant! It made me laugh so hard!

But I have to point out that you made several mistakes: 'Your' instead of you are, and 'can't not' instead of cannot (you can use either can't or the complete form cannot, not both at the same time), but I guess you already know that...

Anyhow, sorry, but I'm kind of a grammar freak. I like the story and I'm about to move onto the next chapter!

haha, devyn is completely awesome! xDD

gods, I can't imagine how shitty it would be to have that disorder... I mean, I do lie from time to time, but always? and then sprouting such shit that everyone catches on? haha.

well, yeah. pls update sooon. :))

I really liked this chapter, Devyn is so cute but the poor guy doesn't ever get a break.

Don't tell me Chuck is the serial killer.. _

Bloody awesome story. Please update soon, it looks like you havent updated in years. YOU MUST UPDATE SOON. Awesome story.

oh my god, wow. This guy has it rough. :( I kept thinking to myself, over and over, use sarcasm, damn it! But you know, I guess that's just me. :P

Oh god, I just realized that this hasn't been updated for 2 years.. whaaat? Such a good story, gooone. :( I've really really liked it so far. It's not given up on, is it? -.-

update please~ i really wanna find out how this story progresses, who he ends up with, and how/if his "disorder" xD is fixed. so...pretty please with non-buttered popcorn on top update? :D

awww poor Devyn TT-TT its too bad his family cant understand D;

OMG shits going DOWN xD gonna read that next chapter nowwwwwwww :DDD

awesome second chapter :D i fricking love Devyn xD he's so cool

ah this is so cool! xD i've never heard of this kinda of story lol. I can't wait to read more~~~

Aww :(

I feel so sorry for him..I'm so glad he's got chuck :)

Just because he's a pathological liar and he said he'd steal the cd doesn't mean he would actually have to steal it, does it? I mean, he didn't even mean yes.