|Reviews for A Ghost|
| Unknown Error 4.0 chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Wow, that was powerful. The repetition really got me into the rhythm, and I love the descriptive language ("twisted, broken, deprived", "run down, scarred").
Yes, the errors have been occurring because of the lack of reviews. There's actually someone whose pen name is "403 Forbidden" or something like that...I think.
| Utah Dynamo chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
that was great good work.