Reviews for Dream Girl
Amethystars chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Ha! Love it. Any chance for more? Not that the story needs it, but this was so great I just hoped...
Aaerie chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
im not ashamed to say that this story by the end made me cry. I wish something like this could happen minus the dating the brother, just a guy who doesnt give up ad all just for two dances and a fairytale kiss. I LOVE this story, thank you for writing it 3
Mandyg chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
Y oh y a one shot only...

look like a good story...

think about it...please...
Alanisaur chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
sequel?
strawberry ripples chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
UM.

"Go after her. I just might love her."

SO THE BROTHER DOES, AND HE GETS THE GIRL IN THE END WHEN HE KNOWS - -

Wow. I am... wow. I never did like these relationships because, wtf, it's family. It's so HARD to choose, you know? Oh my god. WHY.
CaRiNeSs chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
Aww...that was way cute! Poor Brian though... wish I knew how he reacted!
x Farii chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
Whenever i read Brian here i thought of this guy i know, and he's black.

And i know a Travis and he's white.

Lol, i pictured those two here all the time, and i can't imagine them as brothers :P [No offense though :S]

Anyway i loved it(:

VERY sweet x]]

Definite satisfaction ;)
FLIPPER66 chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
HEY HAVE I TOLD YOU WHAT A FABULOUS WRITER YOU ARE YET.

HM... MAYBE I HAVE WITH ALL THE POSITIVE REVIEWS . SHOOT I THINK YOU MAY HAVE JUST BECOME MY BEST AUTHOR HERE LOL.

GREAT STORY BUT I AGAIN THINK ITS A GREAT LAUNCH POINT FOR A LONGER STORY. THINK ON IT WILL YA.
Songs-from-the-Heart chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
aw so cute! This is an adorable cute story.
septasonicxx chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
This was such an awesome story! I loved reading it, even though I feel bad for Brian [

Good job!
Mxya chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
THAT WAS SO GOD!

loved it, absolutely loved it!

Thanks for writing!

Mxya
Elizabeth Cross chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
Okay, I think that you are my favorite fictionpress author. So freaking cute. I love the fact that her name is Kris. xD
Ravina chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
It sucks that Brian is so into her too...but what can they do, right?

Great one-shot! I just wish you went on to write Brian's reaction and Travis and Brian's reconciliation...it's hard to know that the brothers are going to have tension between them because of Kris.

- Rebekah
firefly114 chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
This was so sweet. A great oneshot!
truebleu chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
I liked this story.

It's sad but realistic.

The things you do for love, huh?

Great story, overall.
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