|Reviews for Dream Girl|
| confidentduck chapter 1 . 9/26
Oh, gosh. As smokin' as Travis sounds, I would not swap places with Kris for a second - breaking up with a guy to then go out with his brother would be the most uncomfortable thing! But I really loved how you portrayed their attraction to each other, it had a really 'I'm-crazy-about-you' feel. Glad I found you, I really like your work! xx C
| Amethystars chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Ha! Love it. Any chance for more? Not that the story needs it, but this was so great I just hoped...
| Aaerie chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
im not ashamed to say that this story by the end made me cry. I wish something like this could happen minus the dating the brother, just a guy who doesnt give up ad all just for two dances and a fairytale kiss. I LOVE this story, thank you for writing it 3
| Mandyg chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
Y oh y a one shot only...
look like a good story...
think about it...please...
| Alanisaur chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
| strawberry ripples chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
"Go after her. I just might love her."
SO THE BROTHER DOES, AND HE GETS THE GIRL IN THE END WHEN HE KNOWS - -
Wow. I am... wow. I never did like these relationships because, wtf, it's family. It's so HARD to choose, you know? Oh my god. WHY.
| CaRiNeSs chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
Aww...that was way cute! Poor Brian though... wish I knew how he reacted!
| x Farii chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
Whenever i read Brian here i thought of this guy i know, and he's black.
And i know a Travis and he's white.
Lol, i pictured those two here all the time, and i can't imagine them as brothers :P [No offense though :S]
Anyway i loved it(:
VERY sweet x]]
Definite satisfaction ;)
| FLIPPER66 chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
HEY HAVE I TOLD YOU WHAT A FABULOUS WRITER YOU ARE YET.
HM... MAYBE I HAVE WITH ALL THE POSITIVE REVIEWS . SHOOT I THINK YOU MAY HAVE JUST BECOME MY BEST AUTHOR HERE LOL.
GREAT STORY BUT I AGAIN THINK ITS A GREAT LAUNCH POINT FOR A LONGER STORY. THINK ON IT WILL YA.
| Songs-from-the-Heart chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
aw so cute! This is an adorable cute story.
| septasonicxx chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
This was such an awesome story! I loved reading it, even though I feel bad for Brian [
| Mxya chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
THAT WAS SO GOD!
loved it, absolutely loved it!
Thanks for writing!
| theloverslife chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
Okay, I think that you are my favorite fictionpress author. So freaking cute. I love the fact that her name is Kris. xD
| Ravina chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
It sucks that Brian is so into her too...but what can they do, right?
Great one-shot! I just wish you went on to write Brian's reaction and Travis and Brian's reconciliation...it's hard to know that the brothers are going to have tension between them because of Kris.
| firefly114 chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
This was so sweet. A great oneshot!