Reviews for Something's Wrong With You, Really
Ms ShiSha chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
wow- this was really great

most of the time i didn't know whether to cry or to smile and i like this writing style a lot. It was very well written and had captured my heart from the beginning on (sounds cheesy i know) and i just loved the ending, great really! ...he was kissing the hell out of her ... ah! just loved it!

Incohesive chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
I laughed at the ending

good read :D
LaLa chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
This was really sweet. I'm glad that you didn't make the ending tragic. It is very well written and has a nice flow to it. I think this would an excellent longer story. The beginning of their relationship sounds really interesting or even what happens after he leaves the hospital.
sleep deprived insanity chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
well written. loved it!(:
NoieD chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Great job with this; I really enjoyed it. I hope you'll post something else with these characters! Obviously their usual interactions would be fun to watch as they attempt a relationsihp
jenjen-0 chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Wow, at that last part I really thought he was gonna die! That'd be awesome in one way, cause I love depressing things. But then, happy endings are also awesome xD
Your Loser chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
that was so nice! O_O

i was squirming in my seat thinking that you'd kill him any time. haha

love, love love the time,

made it very special~ ;;
innoc3nc3cuti3 chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
I really enjoy your one shot. I like your usage of the time.
proud2bus chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
I loved it! It was just really well done!
coloring chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
lol, at first i thought it was going to be tragic. phew.

i loved it, loved the style, love the whole thing! :)
Lilang chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
Well, a part of me really really thought that an evil part of you had made this tragic.

Made the 'happy' ending even better, actually :)
Hollywoodz0mbie chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
Aww. I love this! Good job. ]
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