Reviews for Something's Wrong With You, Really |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow- this was really great most of the time i didn't know whether to cry or to smile and i like this writing style a lot. It was very well written and had captured my heart from the beginning on (sounds cheesy i know) and i just loved the ending, great really! ...he was kissing the hell out of her ... ah! just loved it! greetZ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I laughed at the ending good read :D |
![]() ![]() This was really sweet. I'm glad that you didn't make the ending tragic. It is very well written and has a nice flow to it. I think this would an excellent longer story. The beginning of their relationship sounds really interesting or even what happens after he leaves the hospital. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well written. loved it!(: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job with this; I really enjoyed it. I hope you'll post something else with these characters! Obviously their usual interactions would be fun to watch as they attempt a relationsihp |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, at that last part I really thought he was gonna die! That'd be awesome in one way, cause I love depressing things. But then, happy endings are also awesome xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was so nice! O_O i was squirming in my seat thinking that you'd kill him any time. haha love, love love the time, made it very special~ ;; |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoy your one shot. I like your usage of the time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! It was just really well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, at first i thought it was going to be tragic. phew. i loved it, loved the style, love the whole thing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, a part of me really really thought that an evil part of you had made this tragic. Made the 'happy' ending even better, actually :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww. I love this! Good job. ] |