Reviews for In the Spotlight
Vegetarian Meatballs chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
I liked how the whole poem is simple, endearing, and yet completely true. This poem is easy to relate to since many of us have been to events such as those. Nice work!
girl like cheshire chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
"Each person reveals a fragment of themselves"

yeahyeah this pulls it together perfectly.

love the last line. normally overly vague words like eternal bug the junk out of me, but in this context i think it is one of the only things that can convey the amount of emotions left hanging in the air.