|Reviews for Witches Brew|
| MidnightRythm1990 chapter 2 . 1/7/2010
i love love love it!
i'm guessing Gabby's a witch from the title? Update soon hehe
| ADSpencer chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Lively and interesting characters so far. I think the MC has a slight awkwardness that's charming. Nicely done there.
However, I would suggest you break up some of the larger paragraphs, especially where you've put dialogue from more than one character into one paragraph. It looks slightly choppy, but it's necessary for readability to break up a paragraph when you're going from one character to another. Makes it much easier on the brain.
I wouldn't mind reading more of this :)