Reviews for Because, Sometimes
SugarCraziiness chapter 3 . 6/28/2011
It's me! Cause I'm too lazy to log in, yup.

I cannot tell you how many times I cracked up during that. Like, seriously, every time I saw the "OH HOT DAMN Let us double take again and again" I nearly fell over ROFL-ing (I can't believe I just attempted text speak) all over the place. And that wouldn't be good. I'm at my mom's workplace and everyone's been looking at me like I'm crazy, giggling like a hyena O.o

Anyhoo, seriously, funny, cute, adorable stuff there. I love Macy's hilarious cover-ups and overall randomness. "Shovel and hoe!" I swear I will be quoting that for ages.

It's good to see you updated! Write moarrrrr sometime 'kay?

-Leanne
JoBryogurt chapter 3 . 6/27/2011
It was a great story that wasn't hard to follow at all. I loved the description "OH HOT DAMN let us double take again and again." It's hard falling for your best friend because of all the complications that arise but true love has no boundaries, eh? :D Nice use of the paper hearts and the marbles although it was quite hard to understand what the string to the windows thing was. Reflecting on this story, I think it would be really cool if you lived RIGHT NEXT DOOR to someone even though they're just a friend. Bonus points if they are the OH HOT DANG let me double take again and again friend. ;D I loved reading it.

Mahal kita, toffeecakesxox.:]
KariandTK chapter 3 . 6/27/2011
AHHH! Great to see you back toffecakesxox! :) Love this chapter and Cam was so slick trying to make Macy all jealous. lol. Great job!
KariandTK chapter 2 . 8/15/2009
I really like it. I'm glad that she and Carter were able to get themselves back to each other.
NattyAwesome chapter 2 . 8/15/2009
I absolutely loved it! LOVED IT.

And see a pattern.

You have a thing for guys with names that start with the letter "C"?

And then there's girls with "M".

Hm... Coincidence? -shrugs-

BUT I LOVED IT! SO ADORABLE. As your stuff ALWAYS is.

I hope you find more inspirational stuff sooner so I can read more sooner!
Miss-You-Too chapter 2 . 8/14/2009
This was great it has a lot of emotions and meaning, and i likes that a lot!
MusicLuver373 chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
oh nice! intresting this is different! havent read anything like it yett hahaha good! like it! hahahaha
bookhugger chapter 2 . 8/14/2009
:) It was absolutely brilliant! I loved it! Even more than the first chapter, which I thought was great!

The ideas are so cute. Maybe you should say "a series of one-shots" in the summary?

Keep writing! I want more! :P
SugarCraziiness chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
Cute ideas! I have to admit, I'm a coffee lover. It kinda reminds me of this Korean drama I saw once called Coffee Prince, with the baristas and foam-images and all. I watch too many shows sometimes, lol. Anyway, I saw on your page that you have an AIM. I should find you sometime (once I figure out how)! My username's SugarCraziiness. Anyway, I'm off to read more oneshots.

-Leanne :3
Cynically In Love chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
Okay, so I finally got the chance to read this and it's so cute! I love it and Mariella and Caleb make such a cute couple! I can't stop gushing right now and I have to go send you an email. I have a lot to tell, since the last time we've talked! Anyways, I loved it and I can't wait for the next. Very glad that you made into a series of different one shots! By the way, I'm praying that none of the authors on here get plagiarized because a lot of my favorite authors are moving away to a different site!

Love2ReadnWrite
Miss-You-Too chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
I liked this, it was really cute! Although I couldn't help but notice the fact that if coffee spilled on Mariee then how come it didn't burn? Surely its hot, right? Well anyways I liked it and i would like to see more of these mini stories!
bringmayflowers chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
Hey Kristy. I really liked this and I thought you did a great job.

However I do have some beta-reader like things to say to you. If that's okay. One thing is you shouldn't say BFF in a story. It really turns a lot of people off from your character (I'm not just saying it because I was turned off but I have read reviews and seen people's reactions to seeing the acronym in stories here). I also think you could describe things a little differently.

For example, instead of saying:

" Six-year-old Hannah smiled innocently at me, those big blue eyes glistening and her perfect, strawberry-blonde hair curled in ringlets with a matching-the-outfit ribbon settled on her shiny locks, making me almost forgive her and pull my little sister by eleven years into a bear hug."

You could say:

"Six-year-old Hannah smiled innocently at me, her big blue eyes glistening. Her strawberry-blonde hair was curled in ringlets and she wore a ribbon that matched her outfit. It almost made me forgive her and pull her into a bear hug."

I hope that you do not take this offensively. I only mean to help you (and right now I am trying to make my own beta-reading profile). If you have any questions etc. feel free to PM me! :-)
Hopelessly Cliche chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
Aw! Cute!
NattyAwesome chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
That was fantasmically sweet and awesome.

Caleb sounds hott. I think I just may steal him. ; ]
KariandTK chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
I really like stories like this. :) I'm glad that you started writing again. :)
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