aw..how cute..."young love!"...i sound like an old man...but i really like it though it is cliche but something about the story makes it so interesting and when you start reading curiosity will flood your entire body...hehehhe

love yah!

Where's the Aaron in my life, eh? Seriously. I want to order one or something. Can I?

This story... rocked. Made me want to cry and laugh and love the world at the same time. Why are all the sweetest guys always fictional?

I couldn't find anything wrong with the story. Why oh why are your stories always so perfect?

Anyway, it would make my day if you pm me. My author's name - as in my username here- is the same as the name I'm using. So you could pm me some "thank you" if you wanted and I'd probably be overjoyed.

amazing...made me cry

Aw. Super cute. The guy is a bit mushy but actually, I think guys can be as emotional as girls on the inside, just that they don't show it on the outside. Sweet story. I liked it. :D I've never read a romance fic from a guy's point of view, so this is special. You should try more of this. It's a change from the cliche and I actually find it more romantic to view a situation from a guy's point of view, especially if he's sweet and understanding and cute. :D Red-heads rock!

Riley

That was soo sweet! Great Job! :)

I was a little annoyed by the constant repetition/emphasis on how he "would do anything to make her happy," etc. I'm sure there are other ways to phrase it or other ways to get the same point across and frankly it detracted from the overall story. I think you could've found other ways to express how much he loves her (and besides, the fact that he would do anything for her is kinda obvious, so it doesn't need to be stated 24/7).

Other than that, I thought that, even though this was really cliche and a little unrealistic, this was super cute and heartwarming, and I'm very glad woodstock1969 added this to our c2. (:

wow, these kinds of stories are your best-sellers

Haha, it's blackandivorykeys. You wanna reply to this review? PM me. I'll TRY responding... not sure if it'll work though.

So anyways, I really do love how your plot was developed. Simple, yes. But nonetheless, an enjoyable read.

Oh, reddish hair reminds me of Edward Cullen... hehe. I'm currently suffering withdrawal as fanfiction is being stupid with me.

Anyways, hope you keep writing this up. D

Aw, so cute.

Good job!

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Aw. He's such a pleaser. I probably wouldn't have fallen for him though. Too nice. I like boys that tease me, albeit playfully.

But boys like this are the best and deserve the best too :p

I don't understand how girls do that to themselves. I think I'd get a little annoyed if someone kept doing that to me. (the guy who keeps bailing on her)

But I liked the story! Much relief after draining macbeth essay!

aw this was so cute!

i loved it )

Definitely enjoyed it and you did a good job with the guy's point of view. But the ending got fuzzy. I'd have liked some dialogue confirming their friendship as well. Perhaps a sequel?

ohmygod, i love Aaron. :D

he's so sweet!

that totally wasn't pansy-ish, i promise!

that was adorable and cute and i love him.

i want a guy like that.

i need a guy like that.

love.

love.

LOVE.

-toffeecakesxox.

Aw, very cute story. I love one-shots and I love the best friend turning into a romantic relationship thingy

Very good writing.

Aww, he's cute, I want a best dude friend like that

Peace,

Joker