Reviews for Hummingbirds
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
Lovely piece. I can clearly picture the image you're creating, and the cheerful tone really created a distinct mood.

I also like your rhyme. It was really effective with the tone and was never forced.

[I sit and wonder why]

This line seemed a bit off with the rhythm, which was otherwise good.

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kyox88 chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
i like this one! its short and rhyme, and it is meaningful! i can imagine the hummingbirds u have in mind when you were writing this. but...i dont quite like the last line, its no really an satisfying ending for this poem..other than that, good job!
OspreyEagle chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
That was awesome! :D I love hummingbirds, some of my favourite animals.
Liz chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
The poem is very visual, you paint hummingbirds in the mind. Good poem.