Reviews for Fall
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
Once again, I love the tone of this. It's so light and cheerful. The last line really contributes to it, too. It's cute

The first stanza was a bit confusing, though. The first two lines were pretty repetative, and the third line didn't really seem connected.

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kyox88 chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
i agree with other writers, this poem is so cute! again, i think it is very suitable for young learners! sth that can be used in a language classroom apart from nursery rhyme! good job!
SilverDragonWolf chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Defenitely sums up my view of fall- excellent job, and not too heavy :).
owlvisions chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
So cute!
OspreyEagle chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
That was adorable, I love it! :)