Absolutely beautiful. Your poetry gets better and better each time I return to read your work. Very eloquent imagery. I really enjoyed this, keep writing! And thanks for the review.

Hourglass shaped poetry. I am in love )

Very nicely done,

"And wait for the sands to fall and see

If slow erosion can wash away all this

shadowed life"

Thats my favorite line.

Props to you! Job well done D

Uhh, wow.

I love the shape. This is beautifully written.