LOVED THIS CHAPTER. LOVED THE INTERACTION WITH JEFF AND AMY.

OMG! I HOPE THAT ERICA WILL BE OK.

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. I AM GLAD THAT ERICA AND JEFF TOOK CARE OF AMY.

I AM SO SORRY I HAVENT REVIEWED IN A WHILE, I JUST DIDNT HAVE THE TIME TO COME ON HERE TO READ. BUT I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. I AM GLAD THAT SHE FOUGHT BACK. I'M OFF TO FINISH READING THE REST OF THE CHAPTERS.

I just finished it after finding it this morning and I love it soo much! Thanks for writing this!I thought Jeff was dead and was nearly crying!WEll done XD

Your spelling errors are atrocious... I'm just saying... But I love the story so far, it's just hard to fill in the blanks when you use "who" instead of "you" and so on. Or completely forget to place words in a sentence to make it actually make sense. But I totally understand when I get excited about a story and I can't get it out fast enough words are completely forgotten. I'm going to get back to reading! Love it so far!

omg! i so badly want to kno wat is happenin to Erica, u got me leanin in my seat.-

itsincredibly sad, how the girl is in constant fear of her adoptive father.

oh yeah, also i thin its cool how hes a twina dnwats even more awesome is that im a twin to and im 1 minute older than my sister.

YOU! *points the accusitory finger* YOU almost made me CRY! I thought JEFF was dead, I was almost bawling until you said he was alive. I was going to leave a really awful review as well, but then when I found out he was alive, god I feel so much better! XD This has been a brilliant story, and I hope I read another of yours soon!

okay jeffs fine.

why did her mother die?

;[

it just clicked

jeff died didnt he?

aww!

ally i love it!

it was sso cute

i was a little worried tho at the very beginging of this chapter that you killed off jeff, then i was liek wait ally wouldnt do that :) i love you aly!

friends for life and you know it! no matter what happens! friends for life! you arnt getting rid of me!

joey- allison i loved it! shes right you know, ive known her for a long time and i still cant get dir of her! :) haha!

Aw I almost cried...

Although in 22 when she was having her head smashed against the wall it reminded of a role play thing that i did last night...one of my characters just beat the crap out of this guy, smashed his head into the floor and then threw him against the wall. It was so bloody o.o but he deserved it XD

Aw

That made me want to cry! TT

I wanna know what happens next too!

Write more!

No! In all my favourite stories the main guy characters are dying or seriously injured. It's just not allowed! UPDATE again soon right NOW! ... eh. or whenever you can XD