Reviews for Shattered Lives
colourmyworld chapter 21 . 11/3/2009

Soory i didnt update on the last chapter FP wouldnt let me


ah Jeff

my god i HATE her dad i hope he (insert bad swear word here) dies!

YOU MADE MY MOOD WORSE.JERK chapter 21 . 11/2/2009


but other than that i loved it!
colourmyworld chapter 19 . 10/29/2009

Trinity-Ann chapter 19 . 10/28/2009
what i dont get any credit for helping? wtf! lol ily ally! i love it!

colourmyworld chapter 18 . 10/24/2009
I'v read alot of good stories this week from FP but this tops it.

Its awesome.


Please dont ever stop writing, your great at it.

Whoa!I'm such a weirdo.

Update soon please.
Sparky again 4got something chapter 18 . 10/21/2009
also aka


haha i forgot that one! lmao

im sick you cant blame me!

your not on aim and i hate you for it...:)

ily!/secretly hate you!

Sparky chapter 18 . 10/21/2009
ok well i was to lazy to log in!

ok well 1. i read this in the morning and considering im sicker than a dog. you had a few mistakes! haha!

i like it tho! she needs to tell him soon! or i might kill you... haha lmao

i love you ally! (secretly hate you)

your best friend




now that i have reviewed it im going back to bed before i die...

LorriBetha chapter 18 . 10/21/2009
Aww, so cute, and sad. I reallyneed her to let Jeff and Erica help out now, I don't want her to have to hide it anymore! Hope you'll UPDATE again soon, I really wanna know what'll happen next!
Sabrina chapter 2 . 10/21/2009
Why does Jeff keep popping out of nowhere? You need to build more sequence of events. The chapter was boring. Nothing happened !
LorriBetha chapter 17 . 10/18/2009
JEFF KNOWS! Finally, thank God! And now at least she knows she has somewhere safe to go ... until her dad finds out and then it'll be a million times worse, but still! Funny thing was, I was just on this story a minute ago, I was going through my alerts section XD And then I get an email saying its just been updated! I'm gunna go see if my magic works on any other stories. Please UPDATE again soon!
LorriBetha chapter 16 . 10/10/2009
I really hope Jeff finds out whats really going on with Amy soon, I want him to be there for her! And thank God Erica at least woke up, I'm so happy you didn't kill her off, I don't think my poor heart could take it! XD Hope you'll be able to UPDATe again soon, thanks so much for the super quick update this time!
Trinity-Ann chapter 16 . 10/9/2009
aw i love it ally! (sorry its not all demand praise demand praise deand. im not in the mood now thanks to that bitch,)
The Xubbz chapter 15 . 10/9/2009
i love this story, please continue!
Trinity-Ann chapter 15 . 10/7/2009
LorriBetha chapter 14 . 10/7/2009
NO! No no no no no no no no no! You CANNOT kill Erica off, otherwise I'll kill myself! It'll kill Jeff, killing Amy, killing their families, killing all friends of the family etc etc, until we're left with nobody! Hope you'll UPDATE again soon, please?
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