Reviews for Shattered Lives |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ohmygod! Soory i didnt update on the last chapter FP wouldnt let me grr ah Jeff my god i HATE her dad i hope he (insert bad swear word here) dies! [ |
![]() ![]() YOU RUINED MY MOOD YOU JERK! YOU MADE IT WORSE I HATE YOU! JERK FACE! but other than that i loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome. ihateherdad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what i dont get any credit for helping? wtf! lol ily ally! i love it! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'v read alot of good stories this week from FP but this tops it. Its awesome. ] Please dont ever stop writing, your great at it. Whoa!I'm such a weirdo. Update soon please. |
![]() ![]() also aka The-Broken-Angel haha i forgot that one! lmao im sick you cant blame me! your not on aim and i hate you for it...:) ily!/secretly hate you! Kimmi~! |
![]() ![]() ok well i was to lazy to log in! ok well 1. i read this in the morning and considering im sicker than a dog. you had a few mistakes! haha! i like it tho! she needs to tell him soon! or i might kill you... haha lmao i love you ally! (secretly hate you) your best friend kimberly! aka Trinity-Cullen! now that i have reviewed it im going back to bed before i die... :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, so cute, and sad. I reallyneed her to let Jeff and Erica help out now, I don't want her to have to hide it anymore! Hope you'll UPDATE again soon, I really wanna know what'll happen next! |
![]() ![]() Why does Jeff keep popping out of nowhere? You need to build more sequence of events. The chapter was boring. Nothing happened ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() JEFF KNOWS! Finally, thank God! And now at least she knows she has somewhere safe to go ... until her dad finds out and then it'll be a million times worse, but still! Funny thing was, I was just on this story a minute ago, I was going through my alerts section XD And then I get an email saying its just been updated! I'm gunna go see if my magic works on any other stories. Please UPDATE again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope Jeff finds out whats really going on with Amy soon, I want him to be there for her! And thank God Erica at least woke up, I'm so happy you didn't kill her off, I don't think my poor heart could take it! XD Hope you'll be able to UPDATe again soon, thanks so much for the super quick update this time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw i love it ally! (sorry its not all demand praise demand praise deand. im not in the mood now thanks to that bitch,) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story, please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() MORE! NOW! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! No no no no no no no no no! You CANNOT kill Erica off, otherwise I'll kill myself! It'll kill Jeff, killing Amy, killing their families, killing all friends of the family etc etc, until we're left with nobody! Hope you'll UPDATE again soon, please? |