|Reviews for Pedestrian Lane|
| ModernCinderella chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
There were slight errors but I liked it :)
ang ganda, ang sweet, simple pero nakakakilig :D
keep up the good work!
| TheSweetRevenge chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
Wow this is really good! x3
there are a couple of errors here and there, but they didn't affect the story at all. This is a really good story xD
| Silver Ribbons chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
; - ; How sad, then sweet. I wanted to kick the boy and then I wanted to hug the girl for finding love. The story line was great. I loved it's simplicity and it's sweetness. I have nothing to complain about. To comment on your English, it's fine. You needn't be self-conscious about it. You probably have been English skills than many people on this website. I can't wait to read more of your stories!
| sprmn chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
that was awesome! i was hoping for more xD
and your doing just fine in engish..keep it up:]
| Sev Whitewood chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Interesting idea, I liked the turn-around in the end.
Grammar was not so bad so have more confidence!
| EstrelyaSpica chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
You really improve well
Wahh I think I will not be able to catch up with your improvement
The story or plot is great too!
You've done a very good job! *thumbs up *
| Antonis chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
heay that was pretty good
as for your english it is also very good