Reviews for Little Blue Pill |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. I tried going to your blog address, both the one listed here and the other in your bio. Neither seems to be working? Is there some place new? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Who may I ask, is ever kidnapped by a sane person? |
![]() ![]() The website isn't showing you have to write it like - good luck with the writing and I'll follow you there if I find out where it is :) |
![]() ![]() Good story! although one complaint is that the chapters should be longer because I am loving it so much. Ash is scary but I like it that he looks out for Aisling. Poor River what has fallen into? Really interesting. I have read your other stories umm 'bet' and 'halfway house' don't think I have left any reviews for them but they are also great especially Bet, thought that was awsome! Anyway I hope to see an update soon! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor River, I would be extremely confused and running in front of the nearest train (cuz' if I'm still alive Ash will go hunting!) please update sooN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I Love Ash And Aisling Adorable And Psychotic! I Wanna Know What Happened To Aisling For Him To Have A Different Personality, So Write More Soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Can't wait for more of Ash and Aisling! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please keep updating! Longer chapters would be greatly appreiciated! Great story! I really like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting story, please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story. People should do more stories about kidnapping. I mean, good stories. Some of them aren't so great. Anyway, this is funny and sweet. A little bit scary, I guess, but in a good way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a hilarious and scary idea! Luvzit :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like the story a lot so far! |
![]() ![]() Gosh, River is pretty dam talanted I wish i could look at what colour my eyes were, but my nose just keeps getting in the way.. im sorry, that was just one tiny thing that bugged me. The rest of the story sounds really interesting. Nice concept, its really original |
![]() ![]() ![]() It great but just check for grammer and spelling. |