Reviews for Fire and Ice
adaranaelsaldeur chapter 12 . 11/20/2010
LAKEN IS MINE!

teehahaha...

Seriously though, you make it sound like Athanasia is real... it takes a lot in a writer to do last part is really cute. I wonder if anyone is going to try and steal Genesis away from Laken, though. I'm a huge fan for love triangles...

So yeah, I'm totally in love with your story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

-me.-
Watchmedie chapter 12 . 11/19/2010
I apsolutly love this story, ive been following it since the begining. I can't wait for another chapter, update soon :-D. a little constructive ctritism, maybe make the chappters a bit longer, cuz at the end of every chapter im sad its over, but the story itslef is amazing, please dont stop writing

-watchmedie
Cassadaga chapter 12 . 11/19/2010
Just as I was about to get off the computer, I decided to check if any of my favourite stories had been updated and here this chapter is! so exciting!

To be honest, it was a bit cliche, and I didn't care for how Gen kept on arguing and talking about what might happen if they started hating each other. I sorta wished she could've been a little more...deliriously blissful instead, I guess. haha.

But clickes are okay sometimes, and I still liked the chapter. Thanks for the update :)
ClassicStatic chapter 11 . 11/12/2010
Lovelovelove :D more pwease ? It's awesome.
Silver Snowdrop chapter 3 . 11/8/2010
Wow this is a great story! And I love Laken's name. :)
Hydie chapter 11 . 11/5/2010
awesome. :) Like the way you're progressing the story.
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 11 . 11/4/2010
Aww.. Laken is so cute :)

Anyway, I think this story is really great and I cant wait until ur next update!
Lucid Lune in Acoustic chapter 11 . 11/1/2010
Yes, Gen is a bit thick, but I accept that about her. So, this chapter was long, longer then it's predecessors - I think. I'd seen that argument between the girls coming and it got here, with a vengeance. Gen did take it a bit far, sure, but getting with your guy (even if he is your intended soul-mate) on the first night is a bit risqué. But Lyric's my girl, passionate and impulsive, though minding one's business has worked out for others rather well in the past. _ I enjoyed this chapter, but it felt a little rushed in places. I'm happy Lake and Gen are finally being honest about their feelings.

Meeting the parents. I honestly do not understand why this is such a big thing in a person's life. Maybe because my immediate family is, for the most part, insanely cool and the other part...well, I could not care less.

*Peace, my sister.
Pearlblue5 chapter 11 . 11/1/2010
So sweet! I hope Gen can learn to trust Laken!
MarvelMe chapter 2 . 11/1/2010
Oh my gosh! I read your story through chapter 11 so far all in one night! I stayed up to one in the morning! ( Eh...Not that it takes me that long to read)Anyway, I love this situation. It is SO cute!

Oh, God. I sound like a cheery, pigtailed, fangirl, freak...

Well, back to reality:

I only have one thing to be a pain about...sorry.

But, due to my nerdyness, I happen to be a girl obsessed with Marvel Comics and superpowers and I wanted to let you know that telekenisis is the ability to move objects with your mind. Telepathy is the ability to control, read, and get inside other people's minds using your own.

You probably just got confused when you said the Genesis's friend, Emmy had telekenisis instead of telepathy so I wouldn't sweat it. I only commented on it because i'm a secret nerd.

Go Lakenesis! (see what I did there?)

I'm lame. But your story SO isn't. PLEASE UPDATE! I'LL follow this story, i promise!
notjustink chapter 11 . 11/1/2010
Your writing has really progressed since you first started, and the more frequent updates make me love it even more. :)
HelgaBertoni chapter 11 . 11/1/2010
Loved it, update soon!
I Will Not Die I Will Survive chapter 11 . 11/1/2010
awesome chapter :D it was so good i cant wait for the update please make it soon XD
FairyOfDeath chapter 3 . 11/1/2010
3 chapters in...its kinda boring...
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 10 . 10/29/2010
Aww...

Its sweet but its so infuriating that Genisis wont just let things happen with Laken!
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