Reviews for Fire and Ice
kangawu12 chapter 5 . 6/9/2009
O I love this story

please update soon

its awesome!
Imagination's Dust chapter 5 . 6/9/2009
You want to be careful where you go with this. Laken is very much in dangerous cliche territory, but a few realistic quirks will help that. Don't make them pointlessly hate each other. That's what it seems like to me when you say that Laken made smartass comments but don't tell us what exactly he says that makes Genesis hate him.

- HT
Daemon of Cybele chapter 2 . 5/22/2009
Again, I really like this, although I think you leave out of commas when you shouldn't.

Still, this is pretty cool, and I like Genesis.

Dae
Daemon of Cybele chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
I like this...There was one sentence that totally had no punctuation-

"Of course it didn't happen right away otherwise we would be babies our entire lives."

And you might think about rephrasing it, anyway.

Other than that, this looks cool, and even if you don't think it's a very original idea, if you can make it your own, that's all that matter.

Dae
Grenna-Chae chapter 2 . 5/22/2009
You have such an interesting plot for this story. I'm really curious now to find out what will happen at the academy.

Good luck writing the next chapter!

Regards,

~Mary
hehehaha94 chapter 2 . 5/19/2009
hey...interesting story..i wonder what happens next hehe..
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