|Reviews for Flower|
| wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
Sweet and simple!
| BellsAndRoses chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
This is a good start. The first line could have four or five syllables (you are aiming for five syllables) depending on if you pronounce "gently" as gent-ly or gen-tl-y. The second line has five syllables, but it should have seven. But the third line is correct, five syllables. But backing away from the mistakes, it is a very nice poem.