Reviews for Kiss
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
HAHA, I'm sorry, it made me laugh out loud xD I've never seen anyone describe love as saliva swapping.. Umm yes disturbing as it may sound it is true, and I guess with your loved one it would sound absolutely delicious XD A very original idea!
FaithMemory chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
LOL. never got my kissed yet.. but this is just too.. weird LOL. but anyway very nice haiku. :)
BellsAndRoses chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
A very different way of describing a kiss, it was interesting. Originality is a wonder aspect of this poem, good job.
LostInMe chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
"Saliva swapping" - Sick, but good! I like it. This kissing description is very original, I think (though I haven't read many other kissing descriptions, to be truthful).
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
I like this. People have described kisses a lot in poetry, but yours is different. It's funny, but sweet and the same time. I also like that last line mainly because I love hot chocolate... lol.

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