Reviews for Monday Tuesday
fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
Oh my word o_O I loved this, how you use such ordinary concepts - days of the week. Love grows and gets wasted every day.

This is sad in a strange way.. Sad because it's so insignificant. Hmm. I don't know what to say :/ I love this piece.
BellsAndRoses chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
You only have four syllables in the first line, but other than that it was quite good.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
Thanks for your review awhile back, sorry it took me so long to return the favor!

First line only has 4 syllables. I also don't understand the last line, who does the you refer back to?

I did like the first two lines though. Loving each day more than the next is a nice trait to have.

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Noscimus chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
I like it.

The first line has four syllables.